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Tug of love

I try to love you, you shove me away,
People tell me to give up,
But why should I when you’re my best friend?
People tell me that I will find someone better,
I tell them to leave me alone; they don’t know my life,
I try hard every day not to think of you, but how can I when you’re right here talking to me?
We had so many great memories together,
So, when I see you with her,
How do you think that makes me feel?
We will be talking about random things,
Then you walk off when she near, like I’m not even there,
Why do you do this to me?
I don’t want to break your heart just so you can be mine,
Please tell me how to feel,
All I know is this,
don’t tell me to feel this way.

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