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Some Sort Of Sense Of Companionship

Look:
It's a simple procedure,
Really.
I don't see what all the fuss is about.
It's just like when you get it checked out.

You don't even have to pay for it!
I'll pay for it.

I love you.

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n a n o o k o f n e w j e r s e y

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  • Naridill gold member
    November 12

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    I like the end.

    I like the implements of this piece. Seems harsh. But it's truth to some extent, from outsider looking in, I get this but my shoes are else where, it seems.