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demon

who is she?
what has she become?

shes a demon
heartless and cold
what did she do to herself?
how did it get like this?

her words are piercing
right through your heart
her eyes are like fire
burning at your soul
her touch is intoxicating
poisoning your body

the voices control her
shes lost control
so be careful
don't be fooled by the smile


she'll drag you down with her
into the fires of hell

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  • PinkeyPromise
    November 21
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    wow this is amazing!! it reminds me of the play i was just in. i love it!!!

    simply amazing,
    destiny


  • XxTWLOHAxx
    November 18
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    i really love this poem!
    so much angry tho! i love the way it flows!
    you an amazing writer it ridiculous!
    love you hun
    xox


  • Xxcant runxX
    November 9
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    wow this is incredable
    great job


  • Fallen-Thumper
    November 9
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    i feel like vthe demon here, youve just described me :s
    a really great write and i really like it, great job
    love you


    • silentlovex3
      November 9
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      holly ur not a demon!!

      loveyoutoo

      • Fallen-Thumper
        November 20
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        i am at the moment,ive left you and im so so sorry i really dont want to.



        ....dontforgiveme,idontdeserveit



        istilloveyou<3

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