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As I Lay Open

The way you lovingly gaze at me
changes how I am feeling,
as I lay open to your touch,
a rose tinted blush alters the
appearance of my pale complexion,
tingling, excited, flushed.

Teasing me, you stroke
my full curves of arousal,
softly kissing lips -
that drip in words of amour.

As you inhale my floral notes
of soft scented jasmine,
you're enticed lower, eager
to stave your craving of me,
only to be sated -
by loves sweet nectar,
hidden deep within my
fragrant centre.

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  • twodie4
    November 15
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    You have took me on a most beautiful sensual journey of a loving couple and how that special look can and does change the way you are feeling. Leaving you in a beautiful pale blush. This was delightful to read.

    All the best to you sug
    Emma


  • ennovy silver member
    November 8

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    What a oral senation you have painted, with a very heated concept of
    pure untamed passion. Just perfect for this contest.... excellent writing...novy


    • onesugar gold member
      November 9
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      Thank you novy for your fab comment

      Valued and appreciated

      ~sugar~