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Tell Me...

Tell me that the stuff you said
Was a LIE
Tell me that you don't want me
So I can CRY
Tell me that I shouldn't
Even TRY
So my Insides
Can DIE
TELL ME...

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  • Deadly Sinner
    November 12
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    Love

    Reading that, I felt likr you have been hurt, by love or by losse. I can tell you in truth that I have felt that sting.


  • SweetZombieSurprise silver member
    November 10
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    very powerful poem
    and i believe this is a feeling everyone can understand no matter how strong they think they are
    keep up the great work


  • Domino-Punky-Heart
    November 9
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    I love this poem too. To me, it dosen't matter how long or short a poem is...but rather how its written and the feeling it gives.

    -Domino - Scott S.


  • xXxEmoVampirexXx
    November 8

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    I love this poem, Its short but really has feeling. :]
    Thanks for sharring!
    Also- I think yew should make it a 'lil longer if yew can. :]
    -Taylor


  • Perhaps A Kiss
    November 8

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    It's short but meaningful. I think. Lol.
    I can relate to this poem in a way, so I like it a lot.

    Thanks for sharing this with the community of allpoetry.

    Much love and many hugs,
    Taylor.


  • morphis78
    November 8
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    Cool

    simple and to the point but very heartfelt....I like it...

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