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Saphirre Dreams in a Crystal Pool

I sit staring out the window
Pondering life
Pondering love


Saphirre dreams
in a crystaline pool


Sweet luminecent dreams of you


Though I know not if you exist


My sweet dream
My moonlight lover


I ponder if you truly exist somewhere


A heart strong enough to love me,
a Mind open enough to understand me
Never judge me
Arms gentle enough to hold me
but with the strength to protect me


Tell me my love,
when will this dream come true?

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  • God of Thunder
    November 10

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    Very well written Jetta. Stunning imagery that brings the reader into your world and heart. Thank you fir sharing this piece of your soul with us.