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Pain I feel

My eyes burn
A tear falls down my cheek
I rummage through my drawers
A knife is what I seek

I find the knife I seek for
I bring it to my wrist
I slide the blade against my skin
The feeling that I've missed

The tears, they flood my eyes
As my arm begins to bleed
I try to clean up the mess I've made
I have finished my evil deed

I face the world again today
with all the pain that I feel
I cover up my scars again
but my heart will never heal

Author notes

I wrote one version of this poem and then, with the help of Aaron Keeton, i revised it to give it more feeling.

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  • foxgirl
    November 8
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    this is an amazing poem!