You aren't worth the tears I cry.
I'd love you tommorow,
but I fear I'd die.
I would feel so hollow
without this pain inside.
In sorrow I wallow
and I'm falling
to fly
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the very first sentence was amazing
i wish i had conviction such as that. -
Last two lines of this are fantastic
I love the idea of falling to fly. Reminds me of the song Cannonball by Damien Rice. Great write!
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great
short yet it really get the picture across well done keep up the good work
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Really liked this, especially the line "I would feel so hollow without this pain inside" 'cos even though its horrible to hurt,it reminds you that you care, whereas feeling nothing can leave you in a really strange place emotionally.Montey
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yeseyes , i love this .
In sorrow I wallow
and I'm falling
to fly
that completed me <3
thanks for shareing , keep penning.
xoxoxoxoxoxoox . :]
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