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her arms laid there,
spread out against her thighs
clenching the bottom of her skirt.
instead of raising them high;
she didn't even try to reach the sky.
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Author notes
prompt 2:
we are human; [ it is in our nature that ]
we wish everything was better.
-MetallicAcid, common conversation
5 lines.
A contest entry
- my sunday ritual is a Quickie. by Not-The-Sun.
525 points, ended November 9, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
honest thoughts. thank you
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she didn't even try to reach the sky
beautiful. i know exactly how she feels.
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Love this!
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thank you
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oh my?!
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Love the title. Very strong imagery, great write.
Fave lines:
"Clenching the bottom of her skirt."
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I think this is excellent. I really loved the depth. The imagery was simply priceless. Amazing, as usual. I wish you luck my dear. Keep it up.
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