The chill of the rain
is me
Honestly, I'm not angry with you
but how I could be
so enticed by your witchcraft
is concerning
I really do think of you
often, as the chill of the rain
succumbs to a glance
Your eyes conform to
the sensory detail
and a place
a chance in spacetime
within my wuthering hands
but far across the sea
I may see you in Eire
and yet, only if you may
permit the symbols clarified
that which births after
the chill of the rain.
Author notes
Another poem I wrote during my robotripping binge; this is about a guy I had a crush on.
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I like how you view life as you put it into words, even about your own personal life.
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A Wonderful depiction ...
A crush ... is a bad thing in my own opinion , its the first step to allowing someone into your heart , and the first step on the road of heartbreak in some cases ... I love the way you write lass ! You have a grand way with painting your emotions for the view of all , and perhaps a more private view of those you do not show others . I greatly admire your heart . And your ability .
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interesting
very interesting and evocative
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