My heart's in your hands
Take care of it please
Eternal our love
My heart is at ease
God sent you to me
Above all the rest
And now we are one
He knew we were best
Nothing can harm us
Though we are apart
Venturing forward
Remain in my heart
Again I must tell you
How perfect you are
No human compares
Nor angel afar
Love lasts forever
Although it may hide
I wish we could now
Remain side by side
Entrust me your heart
I swear that its true
Safely I'll keep it
I'll never harm you
Hold strong to our love
We'll fight through this strife
Our hearts now are safe
Guarded with my life
Until we are one
Believe that its true
Today till the end
I'll always love you
Author notes
What can I say... a couple of teens in love <3 A poem written for who i personally think is the greatest, most beautiful girl in the world. We are going on to our third year together soon, and it has been the greatest years of my life so far. I never had written poetry until i met her. She is the one that inspired me to write all these love poems... This poem was especially tricky, due to a little twist, partially given in the title 
looking forward to any comments or critism.
A contest entry
- Love, Please by Painted Nails.
950 points, ended November 17, 96 entries
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Comments
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good work...i appreciate yur style...!
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The rhythm, the rhyme, the words. Absolutely excellent! I'm listening to a rap song while reading this, and I was bobbing my head. Both beats fit, so that's good. No areas where I had to stop a sec. Great job, and I wish you luck in this love contest you have entered. Beautiful work.
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