Just because I say I’m leaving today,
Doesn’t mean I don’t want to stay,
Please tell me there’s another way,
Your heart is a present I can’t quite reach,
The wrapping is too thick for me,
Just because I say you make me feel sick,
Doesn’t mean I don’t think you’re stunning,
Why didn’t I see it coming?
Your mind is a locked door I can’t break through,
The wall is just too thick for me,
Just because I say I don’t like you,
Doesn’t mean I don’t still love you,
I’ll never find another lover like you.
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This poem is strong. I love the emotions....
The ONLY thing I would change is:
"The wrapping if too thick for me"
I'm assuming the IF was meant to be IS.
I LOVE this poem!
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Thank you for pointing out my typo
it has been changed. And also thank you for the comment, its always great to hear people say such nice things about your work.
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