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I’ll take my simple words,
And I will wrap them in metaphors and analysis,
So you will not know how I am feeling,

I will hide behind them,
So the world will only hear me,
They cannot see who I am or why I am here,
But they would if they listened,

I am not lost,
I am not alone,
I am not the person they see,
They know the person they want to know,
And will only feel the presence of the ghosts they want,

Listen, can you hear that?

I’ll take my simple words,
And I will wrap them in metaphors and analysis,
So you will not know how I am feeling,

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