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I cant do right

I see your face everywhere I turn.
Your on my mind all the time,
I cant do anything right.
I let you go,
I thought it was best,
I set you free.
I didnt love you,
but you loved me!!!!

Im left to burn,
my heart is on fire for you!
But its all just smoke and ashes,
you think Im misleading.
I cant blame you,
I wouldnt believe me either!!!
I cant do anything right.

I loved you once,
and now I do again,
I think it never really left me,
but now Im left with you as just a friend.

I cant do right!

Just learn from my mistakes

But that life.....right?

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