i find my way to our old songs
and listen to our past
my mind replays what you said yesterday
i wonder if it was sincere
your fervor is frightening
and my mind picks apart possibilities
perhaps you're serious
or maybe when i show up you'll laugh in my face
or "love me and leave me"
as revenge for breaking your heart
but my heart tells my mind what will happen.....
i will descend the dog's three stairs
like a princess going to her prince's ball
and there you'll be....
it will be hard to see you
because the last time i saw you
we were saying goodbye
and that was so long ago,
it was the difference between conception and birth
and i have to curtail my wishes
to kiss you
caress you
make love to you
because before i can do that and not explode
into a thousand shrapnel shards
we need to talk,
to recreate relations,
to understand and be understood.
if you truly want me to be yours,
i want to truly belong to you,
and i want to lay a foundation
for a skyscraper,
not a shack.
i missed shining for you.
From my heart to your eyes
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TOUCHING
so intense!
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thanks so much for reading and commenting =]
-K
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tres bien
mon chere c'est tres bien......that little neat navy girl...has this intense one going and so strong....this kind of left an indelible one message that your targetted must have read this so very gleefully.....a tribute of a peom......german knowing passion -
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Merci beaucous (i probably misspelled that, lol)
-K
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Lovely
"if you truly want me to be yours,
i want to truly belong to you,
and i want to lay a foundation
for a skyscraper,
not a shack."
I love that right there. If we are gonna do this again, lets do it up and do it right.
Beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing. I hope your tower never falls!
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting =] I hope so too!
-K
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sweet jesus and all the saints kelli...this is completely beautiful...i so love the last line...and i so relate to it.....you really dug deep here i love it...
thanks for sharing
T
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Thanks ^_^ It was hard to write but i felt great after i was done.... so hopefully that bodes well. Hugs!
-K
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This is a beautiful write. You chose your words well, and created lovely imagery as a result. I, as the reader, can perceive the pain and love because you have expressed it so clearly. I'm especially fond of the final two stanzas and these three lines among it all:
and i want to lay a foundation
for a skyscraper,
not a shack.
And this was an amazing little piece of poetry. When one loves another so strongly, they always have the intent to build a relationship that can be nothing short of extraordinary. You've illustrated that point.
Again-outstanding job.
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Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a lovely comment! Let's hope that we lay a good foundation... I'm glad you enjoyed this =]
-K
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