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He^art

In words can't express
my love for you, my
breath stops without you
but, hey hey hey
who's this new guy?
My he^art made me
c
r
a
z
yes, baby in love
again?
Nay, perhaps my eyes--
they changed for
he^art (his art)

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Option1 and option3 both

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  • as.phy.xi.ate. silver member
    November 8

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    Nicely done. I love how simple yet impacting it is. He^art to His Art was different but unique. I loved the shortness. Well done with less words. Good Luck