Theres nothing to me
I am dead
nothing can survive me
I am bad
you are helpless
I am venus
A contest entry
- Quick...Hurry... Closes Tonight by StormGoddess.
600 points, ended November 8, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
To be honest, this kind of threw me for a loop/ But I will admit I was turned against even attempting to read it with such a dark font against a dark background.
Thanks for entering and good luck
Storm -
-
To be frank with you, It us about the poetry not how the background looks, and I think the poem I submitted was a brilliant use of words describing how Im heartless and cold in relationships and I used the desolate environment of venus to describe that in 20 words, so next time you criticize I would rather it be about the poem and not the background, thank you
-
-
The whole thing about my comment was I had no desire to read it because I feel I should NOT have to highlight text to read it against a background- which I see you have since changed.
But I did highlight it regardless; which I normally don't; and read it being only 20 words. I didn't say anything bad about the poem, just that it threw me off gaurd. You are certainly entitled to your opinion, as I am mine. And I felt others in MY contest were better written or depicted the prompt better. But also as the host. I do not need to strain my eyes to read something that is not legibly seen against the background when this should be common sense to begin with. -
-
Right well that fair enough, Im not going to get into an argument with you over it, just thought it was insensitive to have mad a comment not even abot the poem , but now I see that you have which is the main point of me being on here to get a clearer view point on my poetry and to help me get better.
so thank you anyway Storm.
-
-
-
-
O.O Interesting, Didn't expect that. Good Luck, Good Job
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
