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Loving you Is Beatiful

How do you do it
I could never be mad at you
How do you do it
You put a spell on me
With you green / brown eyes
And you checks so clear
Your long opening arms
Surrounds me
With a warming hug

You make me laugh
You make me want to smile
You make me want to wake up even when it's raning

When you don't know what to do
And you're all confused
You do the best to make me love you

You're incredibly smart
And funny too
How could I ever think of losing you?

I hate it when you make me mad
Words do attack
I hate it when you act so stupid
Laughing at that
I hate it when you listen to them
When you know you shouldn’t
And I hate it when you know your wrong
But don't want to admit it

But when you hold me tight
Say you love me
And call me beautiful in your own way
It makes a difference
The way I think
It makes me love you

Author notes

"I think that possibly maybe I'm falling for you, yes there is a chance that I've fallen quite hard over you" That's my story for the moment! <3

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  • DarkMist
    November 25, 2009
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    it was okayy but still,good

  • JstaTch
    November 8, 2009

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    No revision needed. You've left me speechless and that's rare. Excellent indeed!