Love by fear , is not love at all .
Love by love , did once exist , now not at all ...
Good and bad , its not Black and White ...
Grey I do not see for it is not in sight .
Love for love , By love and awe .
True Love cannot be Broken .
Faux is what Tricks you blinds you ,
Breaks you .
With Love I wish I had , no more ...
But alas .
I cannot break this curse .
And thankful thought , I know not
What I thank , I can safely say .
I fear no Hearse ...
Author notes
Dependability , is dependably out the window --.--
hehehehe
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wow this is amzing i realy liked it great job
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Good .
I'm glad you did .
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Very interesting. A bit much on the repetition. But the overall flow is very nice, I liked this. Keep writing!
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Until my fingers are nubs .
And my palms show bown . I will continue to write ! heheh Thanks for the comment tho .
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Well done!
Maybe its the Atheist I am but I enjoyed this piece because it reminds me of my feeling of "God" and why people believe. Unconditional Positive Regard, its what we all want/need in this life, and the only place people seem to "find" it is in the love brought on by the fear of God's wrath.
"Good and bad , its not Black and White ...
Grey I do not see for it is not in sight ."
Everything in innocent, its all about perspective, and how ones life experience can, per say... color blind?
Tysm for sharing! Thought provoking!
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I have some ..
experience ...with the 'god' racket ... To say the least I agree with you on some levels . But to be brutally honest , I will never write about ...'god' --.--
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dependability
dependability is terribly not found and the love that once there was not felt love it great job
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Thank you .
I do appreciate positivity ...sometimes >.>
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Dependability is the minds eye showing confusion.
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Very true !
So very ... Very true ...
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