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Honor Me With Rainbows

Died of rain and sun
searching for the light you seek
honor me with rainbows

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  • Peteskid gold member
    November 28
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    a very dramatic small poem, dark and moody, a very strong voice here. A lot is said with small number of words, it has a haiku structure of the lines, very creative and poetic...PK


  • Swan song gold member
    November 21
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    a full sized haiku but a little differnt then the norm still thank you for entering


  • DogFish silver member
    November 8

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    Dyed of rain and sun
    searching for the light you seek
    honor me with rainbows

    in the night in the tempest
    rainbows still glow in your eyes