Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

The Gods were Pleased

Missing image
Dancing naked
the gods were pleased

Thrust upon this earth
beams of silver
illuminating life

And forever
they shall grow
flourishing in contrast

The divinity
of their spirit

Author notes

Another attempt
Art provided by the host

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    November 10
    ?
    Edit | Reply
    I love the stanza -
    "Thrust upon this earth
    beams of silver
    illuminating life"

    Sometimes we have to open our eyes wide in order to see the symbols of the ancient mothers.

  • Virgoan
    November 9
    ?
    Edit | Reply
    I really like the first stanza. It has a wider perspective than imagined.

    a very nice poem.

    Thanks for sharing.


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 8

    Edit | Reply
    Looks just like a sprite dancing in the moonlight under the full moon. You have captured this one here honey, and your attempt with free verse and a limited number of words are amazing. Love you honey. All my love to you.

    Joann