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Tenderly,

I unveil this waking dream.

Language is a beautiful burden 

within these moments
when silence holds more clarity than speech.

I open your pages slowly, 

my eyes dripping with wonder;

the strength of your words enfolds me in a subtle embrace. 

 

Quietly, I read the many tales
of your journey towards my heart,

knowing you already sing serenely

inside these volumes of my soul.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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For my husband ♥ 
 
 
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  • GotLilt
    November 14
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    Language is a beautiful burden! Wow !


  • mgmc gold member
    November 13
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    Bravo! Beautifully poetically expressed! Words are an expression of the author's soul
    and they speak eloquently on your behalf! Very nice work! Perhaps if I read enough and keep at it............All the best!

    Marlene


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 10

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    So very loving and beautiful. Your words are soft and tender. Best wishes in this contest
    Gaylene


  • perfectsunset gold member
    November 9

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    So, so very tender and graceful
    piece hun, filled with depth
    and splendor.

    There is such passion within
    this piece, and it's hard
    to pry away from your words-

    they grip.

    Love this,
    and best wishes in the contest


  • michael thomas
    November 8
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    cute


  • transcendental baby gold member
    November 8

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    Spoken like a true bibliophile

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