Venus endowed with all of her charms
could kiss but never caress or hug
becaus, poor gal, had no arms.
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- Quick...Hurry... Closes Tonight by StormGoddess.
600 points, ended November 8, 15 entries
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OMG, I almost fell off my chair. This started so mythical and wham, totally unexpected. But I cannot say it was wrong in any sense of the word. Great take on the prompt.
Thanks for entering and good luck
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Fab! I love how this started off with the promise of a romantic poem and disintegrated into humour with the third line. Very witty and made me chuckle out loud.
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Thats funny, well put!
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hahaha I wasn't expecting that! Great take on the prompt and clever title as well
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Oh my goodness
This is unique and she really didnt have arms .Oh man
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