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Your gone now ...

You asked for my heart .
I gave you my soul .
You wanted my love .
I gave you my all .
Love and Lust , Loyalty turned to dust .
A darkness risen , A Flame ignited ...
I hate what is . I hate what you are .
I will be return to what I once was .
I will be what I should have been , all along .
I am what You loved .
You are what I hate .
Your weakness is blinding .
Your Frailty is endless .

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What do you have , when you have lost what you are , and take up the blood , of what was , and what will be ? -Translation of an ancient Riddle .

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  • Jaffa-
    November 17
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    Have you lost who you are or who you were?
    It's your choice to make, who are you?
    The possibilities are endless and you can make of yourself what you wish.
    Emotions are but an unwanted annoyence when it comes to the depth of yourself.
    To be frail or weak is but a choice for only you to make.
    Make what you love, be you in more ways than anyone else would ever imagine.
    You did it once and you can do it again.

    Loved the write.
    Emotionally driven and amazingly written.
    I very much enjoy your work,
    beautiful in it's... your own way.
    x


    • DraidenGunGiest
      November 20
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      haha

      "in it's... your own way." There is nothing beautiful lass ... its just emptiness ..

      • Jaffa-
        November 20
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        I think it's beautiful.
        It's not emptiness, it's full of raw emotion.
        If you don't think that's feeling then your seriously mistaken.
        You've been hurt and you can feel that in your writing.