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colorless
misty
full breath on mirrors
air presses away the bold home of blood
and lungs, drips swathes of pigment blurred
but holds new kiss prints
makes them look retrospective and glamorous
they suggestively fade away
the sun bounces ravishes Fall
as though it were Summer
bare trees slash moons to submission
snow welcomes dead leaves
but all too late, to no avail
I will remember you until Spring
or dawn
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 



 

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  • Night Hope gold member
    November 10
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    Your writing continues to amaze and inspire all who come into contact with it. I am certainly not immune, either. Good luck in the contest, Sweetie.