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[ i cant sleep alone ]

i cant sleep alone
i have grown accustom to you being next to me
now that you've left
all i do is lay awake at night
i miss your warm comforting arms
i need to feel you wrapped around me in that wondrously comforting way
you took the last thing i valued in life away from me

you took my independence

i am dependent on you to lay with me at night

i wait for you to come home and protect me

all i ever wanted was your love

now i have your love and an addiction

i am entranced with your love

i can not resist your temptations

 

i cant sleep alone..i need you back

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  • Enrinye
    November 17

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    this is really sad...
    but nevertheless a powerful write, full of emotions...
    I think everyone who has been in love can relate to how you feel now...
    I hope you will find someone special again to sleep next to at night...

    take care
    Suza


  • Night Terrors
    November 9
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    good job on this I am sorry that you are going through such a tough time. great job on the poem.


  • lil emo girl
    November 8
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    I know it's not really dark but I'm not feeling anything that inspirational right now..sorry. I hoppe you like it anyway.