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Tomorrow

Tomorrow I will, I will kill.
Nothing will stop me.
They can tie me again; hold me back.
I will do it. I’m fed up of pushing it down.

Tomorrow will, I will slice.
Slice into something,
Watch the edges part; the blood flow.
I promise it. I won’t chicken out of it.

Tomorrow they will, they will panic.
And run in circles.
I will just smile; stand and watch.
A heart of stone. One that will never ever break.

But for today, I will breathe.
I will take what they give.
As it goes down my throat; burns my neck.
I am changed. Gone back to pushing it back down.

But tomorrow.
Tomorrow they will feel the wrath,
The wrath of the ‘tamed’ beast.
Just one more sleep.

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  • phylumasylum
    November 10
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    BEAUTIFUL^^

    no one can refrain the demon within!

  • Joshuavk
    November 8
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    Wow, a strong write indeed, clearly showing your emotion. Hope you didn't write this today

    Cheers, Joshua.