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Falling From Grace

"Falling From Grace"
She cries herself to sleep,
She passes out in the hall,
She dosent believe in happiness,
When she takes a chance she falls.

She gave up on her life,
She was barely nineteen,
Cause her heart was always breaking,
Just the way it's always been.

She's falling from grace,
She never smiles always a frown upon her face,
She's been crying for so many nights,
All she wants in her life is a man who will treat her right.

She says two more drinks,
Then i wont have anymore,
But she wakes up in the hall,
Like the night before,

When will she learn,
The only way to get thru,
Is to open her heart,
Change the way she's used to.

She's falling from grace,
She never smiles always a frown upon her face,
She's been crying for so many nights,
All she wants in her life is a man who will treat her right.

Another valentine day,
Two dozen more cans,
She bursts into tears,
Hangs her head in her hands.

She's falling from grace,
She never smiles always a frown upon her face,
She's been crying for so many nights,
All she wants in her life is a man who will treat her right.

Author notes

This song i wrote in 2007 after a friend commit suicide R.I.P SAM this is for you

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  • bunnyslasher157
    November 9
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    good job on this. Good luck and keep writing!!