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Spring

Spring is a favourite time of year
That all nature seem to share,
A time filled with fun and cheer
And all seem to know when it is near.

Come with me and take a look
You'll see that nature is a book
But beware you may get hooked.

See those trees?
How the grow near leaves
A perfect place to build a nest
Where birds can rest and be refreshed

Look at that bird well perched on that limb
Hear how well it sings.
Well, isn't that something?
How it can make an home from little strings.

Oh! How could I forget those flowers?
Do you notice all the different colours?
I'm just glad that they are ours.
They seem to thrive on those earlier showers
That stretched rainbows across the sky like big striped banners.

Spring is natures time of renewal
And has got a lesson for us all.
If you look real close
You will see most.
It is a time for life
So let's forget all strife
And work together
To make things better.

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 22
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    this is so rich in color, you painted a
    beautiful portrait for all to read,

    loving this !!!

    love and blessings

    Rend


  • awannabepoet
    November 16
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    Nice to see your face in da place man as you know its smooth and nice just like ice.

    Hey what a lovely poem for a first read and darn I would love to be back in Jamaica man, your poem is excellent and speaks of renewal and how it would be nice to finally have the world in a positive place.

    Thank you very much for sharing this.


    • Kazunan
      November 16
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      You're welcomed. Where are you from?

      • Kazunan
        November 16
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        Wow, that's a lot a places you've been to. I plan on traveling the world too someday. Jamaica is still nice despite the fact that some try to tarnish our rep. but it's still lovely and warm (both climate & people). I'm in Mandeville, my girlfriend is from Negril though. Since 1990 a lot of attractions have been added that's a fact. Which hotel did u stay with then?

      • awannabepoet
        November 16
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        Well at the moment I am in Montreal but I was born in Italy and spent a few years in France and 11 years in the States.

        Been having a little fun I guess in this life, where in Jamaica are you at?

        Of course I only played the part of the tourist way back in 1990 and stayed in Negril, it was awesome man.

        Love your island I would love to come back and visit hopefully it is still as spectacular as it was back in the 90's.



  • Cassie fai lume
    November 10
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    Finally an optimistic poem among the shroud of dark and dreary.
    I miss spring already :/
    The blooming flowers are my favorite part.


  • Shantti
    November 8

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    This is a sweet and happy poem. Spring is my favorite time of year and you covered it's beauty beautifully with this. I love the rhyme and rythem.
    Awesome job. This is such a pleasure to read.


    • Kazunan
      November 10
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      Thanks, it's a lovely time of year. Don't know anyone who doesn't like spring.

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