The first day of Fall wears cloudless skies;
She arrives with no grandeur but cool, sweet air,
Which caresses my face and brings tears to my eyes.
For nothing I have ever seen was nearly as fair
As the sparkling river flows past, lazy and wide.
And, I, standing among the frosty birch trees,
Cannot speak for the joy that lightens my stride,
Making my heart desire to take flight with the breeze.
But it’s not the entrance of Fall alone that makes me sing
For you whom my soul loves--yes, this adoration is of you--
Comes the happiness, love and freedom you bring.
My desire is for you alone, and I admire what you do
Whenever we’re together, my love, nothing else is real
It’s you and me, forever; with a kiss, our love, we seal
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Beautiful evocation of love
I relly like this. Your love shines through. I wonder whether a stronger word than 'admire' would be better in the line starting 'My desire is ....'
Very nice. Well done. -
aw, its so sweet. *smile* its very well written.
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