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Mr.Moon

Mr.Moon
He is larger than Pluto.
He is best friends with Earth.
He doesn't like the sun.
The sun makes  him feel small.
But when he stands close to us he looks big.
Why can't the sun just shrink.
It is the way it is for a reason.
Mr.Moon will just have to deal with it
...for now.

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Short but sweat!

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  • Lanasaur
    November 9
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    I like this idea, its very creative however you might want to change the colour of the text. It's hard to read!