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a forgotten time

I´m a princess from a forgotten time.
A time before cruelty, war and hatred
It was a beautiful time, really.
A time of rainbows, cupcakes and glittering stars.
It was a time when love, friendship and equality ruled the earth
and unicorns flew the skies, spreading knowledge and beauty across the great citys of bubbles and tiny little hearts.
yes, it was a wonderfull indeed, so wonderfull that time even stoped.
So, for what should have been thousands of years, the people of my world
lived happily. But infact...
it was only a secound.

Author notes

i was very unserious when i wrote it, but still i turned out to be pretty cute.

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  • Minam
    November 19

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    what?? how come i havent met you before? this is FABULOUS!!! it was so great, and it flowed smoothly and the point was gotten across in less than 15 lines??? WOW this is bloody brilliant!!


    • Storm88
      November 20
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      haha thank you so much XD i was being unserious and laughing when i wrote it, but i think it turned out pretty cute XD

      yeah i dont like long poems, i tend to get bored when their to long and not finnish reading them.


  • im just human
    November 11
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    it is amazing words
    i love your poetry
    keep going