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Introverted handheld storm portably clustered in an anorack (salt and vinegar)

Two mice I saw'd one drowned in butter,
The dogs have come today.

Haunted nights for halycon days: Can't sleep to the scraping of his voice.
When a day comes along, I can feed it and make it go away.

When in doubt you must repeat this elemental post-script refrain.
The stars that hang above you are my light,
Lost, here is nowhere searching home still.

Cannibal!
I've no fight left my calloused benefactor
You unconscionable shit-titan!!
Ceas rău… rău ceas…În miăz de noapte.

In a tiny little cave a dog is sleeping on his back.
The ocean floor is hidden from your viewing lens,
"Rasch, beeilt Euch, steigt hinab, ich hört' ihn atmen dort im Grab!"

(My mind can't shake one sound, it lodged and grew...)

So see how long I can last; you can pretend I don't exist for you.
Hey, you're right get your petals out and lay them in the aisle.

If ignorance is bliss eradicate the knowledge of my history

Can you feel as...a body?
Can you feel as...a life?
Can you feel as...in the blood?
I shall return no more, the sea covers me.
They, the people done like your dinner.





These eyes, do you hide behind these cold blue eyes?

Author notes

p r o g a n d o t h e r

1. Inverted Mirrors of Decay - Leandra

2. Double Barrel Prayer - Diamanda Galas

3. Beneath the Mire - Opeth.

4. Wounds - InMe

5. Puppet Show - Sleepytime Gorilla Museum.

6. The Stars that hang above you - Jesu

7. Dirge for November - Opeth (I didn't want to listen to the same band more than once but my shuffle clearly doesn't like me)

8. Hyperventilation system - Daughters

9. Ceas rău - Negura Bunget.

10. Sleep and Dream - Battle of Mice.

11. Cygnus...Vismund Cygnus - The Mars Volta.

12. The Dog Burial - Sopor Aeternus

13. White Walls - Genghis Tron

14. Feel so low - Porcupine Tree

15. Limousine - Brand New

16. Shame Shame - From First to Last

17. Rocking Chairs and Shotguns - Mouth of the Architect

18. Mary Waits in Silence - Current 93

19. How to become a virgin - The Locust

20. Omnio - In the woods...

Well that let me procrastinate for a good three hours. Huzzah!!

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  • just weak hands
    November 17
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    oh wow, I like it ahaha the profundity is great, even when the lines go from talking about mice drowning in butter to German

    great job, and sorry it took so long to comment ! :]