Oh how fair the crescent form of beloved moon,
How gorgeous the light of far-away stars,
The world prosperous in all it's indescribable ways,
The soft glittering of many a sandy dune,
The presence of ever floating Mars,
Oh to live here forever, one always prays.
The dawn of life, of nature itself,
Has left its imprints on my nurtured mind,
It's rich abundance, immeasurable wealth,
New inspiration in it, I can always find.
The richness of evenings deep calm,
The ever-swaying branches of ancient trees,
The silent waving of long untouched grass,
Amazing birds, all different, abide in bush and palm,
Yes life blossoms everywhere, as far as one sees.
The soft glistening of the impervious tide,
As ocean washes away the lines in the sand,
As the twittering of birds, fills enduring air,
Illuminated by sunbeam, forever so fair.
Yes on this, mankind should abide,
And we should live happily on this enchanting land.
Author notes
Hope you like it =)
While I wrote this, many images came to mind, and I just couldn't resist adding more of our beautiful nature to this poem.
Please comment on my first ''Nature'' poem ^^
Prompt #29: Wonderful world J O S H U A V KA contest entry
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What do you think about my first nature poem?
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pretty and peaceful
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The dawn of life, of nature itself,
Has left its imprints on my nurtured mind,
It's rich abundance, immeasurable wealth,
New inspiration in it, I can always find.
Loved this stanza! This is an amazing write! Thank you so much for entering and good luck in the contest. -
so beautiful i agree w/ perfectly broken this is even better than the poems you put in my contest!!!!
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Thanks >.<' maybe I should put this one in still xD
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this is amazeing! i have to agree w/ PerfectlyBroken, word falls to short. simply beautiful.
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Thanks
Thank you thank you, you are to kind
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thank ur ap sis she recomended it to me
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That was...beautiful, but I'm afraid that word falls to short. Endless imagery that will forever stain my mind.
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I was doing as much imagery as I could
*Thanks you*
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Well you did an AWESOME job! (I seem to be saying awesome a lot when I talk about your poems. lol) And you should totally put this one in RainShatteredDreams contest. She's my ap sis and she seems to really like your poems too. lol And with work like this you would have to win.
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AUh-ma-zing!
It has that flow that I've always wanted to have in my writings. And it's so beautiful, and it describes everything from the stars to the ocean. I didn't mind the length at all. Good job. You brought this prompt in a different way then i expected. But there are some things. IN your AN you forgot to space out your name and put the prompt. Although the prompt is pretty much obvious. But i can't make exceptions. Please fix that. But all in all. it's wonderful.
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Thanks
Fixxed the problems ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, and thanks
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