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Eyes

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Her deep stare into space
Alludes the gazer of her stare.
They are indeed beautiful
but
Are also mystical as well as secretive.
Her stare is longing,
As if she's searching for something
but
Would yo succumb to her snare.
I would be hesitant.
Such hypnotic eyes of beauty
Could be deceiving.
She could be a black widow of prey
or
A vampire's...
Searching for blood to live eternally.
Such eyes are hard to read.
Leaving one wondering...
Is there Love or Evil content in those eyes?
or
Are they only teasing and seductive?
Her eyes. mysteriously enchanting
Make her beauty alluring.
To know their secrets within.

dragonheart1

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unfinished prompt: Eyes
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A contest entry

What do this Woman's eyes speak out to you?

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  • Ani Grace
    November 10
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    Beautiful and provocative. Makes the reader question whether the reward will be worth the risk.
    Good luck to you, this one deserves a second look...and a third... and a fourth...


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    November 8

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    This is such a great take on the prompt. You have done so well her, I really enjoyed reading through this. Well done and all the best for the contest.