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i Love again and again, until it's okay

i am stuck in this weird pattern of bullshit
as my head hurts just a little from last night
i have been turned around and around
until i've become unglued at such beautiful illusions
more so than i could have imagined
and less at the feeling to which i gave in to
i'm stuck on  a certain "you know who."
what a feeling and what a "wow".
lost for words and spinning out of control
one-more-time
it's okay, yes! (it is) oka-y.
we'll pretend she's cuddled right here with me
in our own little cocoon of ever-after affairs and little bits
i will be the first to say
"i love this feeling almost as much as-
i love Her."

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  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    November 8

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    mmmmmm......this just makes me want to take to my duvet...n watch something soppy....sleepless in seattle maybe...or you got mail.....maybe even ps i love you....
    this is a golden write......
    love it..its beautiful
    T


  • stef-witt gold member
    November 8

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    Awwww... This is really sweet. The word "cuddled" is such a cute word