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On A Rainbow

Reside in romance's court.
Fine threads spin heaven's songs.
Love's carol swallows siren's wails.
Magnetic hope summons peace.
Regal wills touch royal delight.
Carry on wonder under starlight.
And eternity bows before harmony.
Whisper hearty treason, but never in my ear.
In the wreckage of life you live by your actions.

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  • Bigz7551
    November 12
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    Love these short poems! You do a very good job of painting a picture. I believe that's the main thing of any poetry. Thank you for your comments on my poem, hope to read more of your poems. Hopefully I'll see some comments on mine from you. Great write.


  • Renai
    November 8
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    And you say you wish you had my talent? NO Dear! You have spectacular talent in this area! <3 I envy you- no no...I adore you- yes...it is adoration!


    • Celestial Geyser
      November 9
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      Your comments always puts a smile on my face. Thank you for always being so supportive. ^^*

  • I absolutely love the last line of this. I think you did an amazing job writing this and want to say keep up the great writing. Keep smiling, and good luck in all you do.


    • Celestial Geyser
      November 9
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      Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. Yours words are touching and inspiring.

  • Bob Fox
    November 8
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    Poet

    your last line says it all. We so often seek that rainbow yet bow to self destruction. and hope, love and self worth become just a drea. Like that ever evasive rainbow. Nicely penned and happy writing.

    • Celestial Geyser
      November 9
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      Thank you for your comment. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. You express yourself so beautifully. Thanks again!

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