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why

Looking down I wonder why.
Why on that someone will make you cry.
you try your best to take your feers aside
while they only lied.
When all was well
you did nothing but fail.
What more is there?
There's no one to care.
You care so much
but without his touch?
What more is there in life?

You want to call
you want to text.
You want to know why...

have you ever felt like this?

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  • Where The Heart Is
    2 days ago
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    WOW

    wow...I'm speechless. This was really good in my opinion. It certainly packs a punch, and really makes you feel. Great job, and I'm sitting here still thinking wow...


  • Diablo90
    November 9
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    AWESOME

    this poem really hits the spot when you feel like reading poetry


  • Fairy Princess
    November 8
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    i like it!! great job!


  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    November 8

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    sometimes in life all we are left with is WHY? I can't really offer great words of wisdom that would help make this pain go away...I do think you have done a fantastic job allowing your feelings of frustration to filter through your writing. Good going poet!
    peace and light,
    Kendal