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Heartless Mind

I’m in brink despair; sorrow
Your heartless mind; against me

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This 10 words contest made me think so deep.

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  • penman gold member
    November 9
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    Wonderful

    A very powerful word choice. Such a great word choice. Best of luck in the contest


  • The kiss is Thirst gold member
    November 8
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    Good use of 10 words here - good luck in the contest.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 8
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    ouch, that throws a punch, thanks for joining in good luck
    Linda