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Heavenly Agony

 
 
Pain pierces 
the brain,
blissful smile
from ice cream
headache.

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  • sakkthi
    November 9
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    marvelous

    perfect imagery used especially as an intensifier

  • Pogo7747
    November 8
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    Good one. I was frozen in emotion. Good luck in the contest.


  • Mr. Person
    November 8
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    Intrging and wonderful great job

  • Wonderful use of 10 words! good luck in the contest.


  • ScarletO gold member
    November 8
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    Heavenly agony ...so true...those headaches are definitely attentive.

  • LovingPhoenix
    November 8

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    I can so relate! I LOVE ice cream! I think it has magical powers to turn gray skies blue! Wonderful write! Good luck in the contest!


  • mgmc gold member
    November 8
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    Great one! Love the juxtaposed title! I'm an ice cream lover also! Great take on prompt!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 8
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    oh yes so true and great reason to be happy but yet stuns the brain, lol thank you for this entry
    good luck
    Linda


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 8
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    OMG this is great
    brain freeze
    scream for ice cream


  • michael thomas gold member
    November 8
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    very nice spumoni.

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