Pain pierces
the brain,
blissful smile
from ice cream
headache.
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10 words
A contest entry
- Laugh, cry or scream by misticmoonlite.
700 points, ended November 9, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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marvelous
perfect imagery used especially as an intensifier
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Good one. I was frozen in emotion. Good luck in the contest.
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Intrging and wonderful great job
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Wonderful use of 10 words! good luck in the contest.
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Heavenly agony ...so true...those headaches are definitely attentive.
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I can so relate! I LOVE ice cream! I think it has magical powers to turn gray skies blue! Wonderful write! Good luck in the contest!
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Great one! Love the juxtaposed title! I'm an ice cream lover also! Great take on prompt!
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oh yes so true and great reason to be happy but yet stuns the brain, lol thank you for this entry
good luck
Linda
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OMG this is great
brain freeze
scream for ice cream
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very nice spumoni.
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