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A Girl Interrupted (18+)

 

A Girl Interrupted the plans that I made

and luscious thighs were longing for play

Licking dry lips an invitation displayed

fingertips had gathered in an unusual way


His over-top mine as it covers my mound

and our fingers slid between moist petals

Through brunette bush the bud was found

eagerly within me our fingers would wrestle


Arching my back to the rhythm of thrust

a river of passion flowed between my thighs

Hands find his shaft and he's about to bust

and the hunger for need is filling out eyes


My head is laying North his is laying South

and breasts are rubbing along his six pack

Fingers are playing and heat fills our mouth

as we devour the fruits of the others love shack


Throbbing thickness bringing me to peak

as I deep throat the length from tip to base

Moans are escaping our will becomes weak

as every thrust of his tongue drenches his face


One head is buried and feeding the other being sucked

and my mouth is craving his creamy spill

Mound is throbbing and wanting to be fucked

but this foreplay of passion is one to fulfill


I'm sucking hard, he's sinking his face in

and bodies start to tremble against the bed

Our hands gripping tight the rides to begin

as he licks up my cream and I drain his head


Then upon completion there came a knock

a Girl Interrupted before the actual fuck

With a sheepish grin she turned the lock

licking her lips and ready to suck


Smiles appeared on the faces of all

as this beauty longed to fulfill the rest

Her lips on my mound and hands on his balls

my fingers tickled neath her perky breast


Soft sighs escaped as she painted me with her lips

and his moans from her stroking turning me on

Within next few moments his hands on my hips

ramming me hard to the rhythm of lusts song


She laid neath me as he fucked with such fire

my tongue exploring every inch of her mound

Temperatures raging and she's full of desire

and my moans escalated with each throbbing pound


My hands on her breasts his hands on my ass

the moment of release fills the evening air

My body bucks and I drink of this lass

and his lips seal off the river not wanting to share


Hungrily he fed as I did the same

our mouths filled with the fruits of desire

That Girl Interrupted, we didn't catch her name

but she kissed us both and left us to retire


Closing my eyes, she drops into my dreams

reminding me of that trip on ecstasy's tide

Searching once more, well more often it seems

for that Girl Interrupted that completed lusts ride








Author notes

Oral Fixation was the prompt...

This may be a little "overboard" for what you were looking for and if it is Im sorry but this is what came out of your prompt lol So you may delete if youd like

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  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    November 19
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    you took it outside of the box.... nice ...!

    unique=
    thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest ♥


  • Lonesome Dove
    November 18
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    You are an incredibly talented erotic writer. Practice makes perfect I suppose hehehe Again you have left me yearning for more so away I go in search of more. Good luck in the contest.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 8

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    Quite an interruption!!!



    You are steaming up AP again!

    Great stuff

    Love

    Jeff


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    November 8

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    Wow girl this was very hot. Had my mind playing so to say . Good luck in the contest SH


  • Sara Khan
    November 8

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    She laid neath me as he sucked with such fire
    my tongue exploring every inch of her mound
    Temperatures ranging and she's full of desire
    and my moans escalated with each throbbing pound....

    Nothing can be more exciting, sweet lady! I wish to be a part of it....if you don't mind


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      November 8
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      just say please and we can pen a collab together


      • Sara Khan
        November 8
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        PLEASE

        PLEASE, MY SWEET MISTRESS....WOULD YOU COLLABORATE WITH ME...DESPITE THE FACT THAT I'M SUCH A BAD WRITER?


  • Griswold silver member
    November 8

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    Damn interruptions anyways!!! Seems there's always something!!! did you get video??? Wonderfully done baby as only you can do it, I hope somebody doens't trip over a stick. Love you baby, best of luck... Scott


  • JohnnyD gold member
    November 8

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    LOL! Now that is what I call walking the plank and having the luck to fall into the river of lust! gonna be really tough for anyone else to beat this write with the heat you've penned on the screen. Hummnnn, it appears my security screen is melting!!! Smiles.....

    great write gal, love ya,



    Len


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    November 8

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    my...my ..my! Oral fixation...you brought the heat to this contest. I am always amazed at the way you are so wonderful at rhyming such erotic poetry. I bow to the QUEEN of Passion!



    Love you...

    Azzie

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