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Haiku/Senryu – [rainbow II]





  rainbow
bridge of imagination
      I pause- in wish




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modern form Haiku/Senryu

A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    1 day ago
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    nicely done and yes seems more senryu then haiku but excellent none the less
    thank you for your entry it was very good


  • Naughtygrlred
    November 18
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    I wish for him to find me


  • Nature Song silver member
    November 8
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    I pause and wish upon a rainbow of ideas! Imagination that sparks us all. Wishful days of childhood yearnings. But the hope that as we grow, we never tend to loose that touch of hope!

    Good luck in Jeff's contest! Great take on the prompt my dear friend. 's

    ~Sie


  • Olivias Violin
    November 8
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    "bridge of imagination" - Great!!


  • amnouup
    November 8
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    It connects

    It connects inner world to outer, nice done!

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