He looked at me with devilish eyes
the cold hearted refuge I started to despise
and out of the dark hollow center he came
possessed by the cold hearted scent of fame
he grabbed my face and heard my cries
"I want to see your face when I kill you!
I want to see the light leave your eyes!"
I felt it inside, the pain that suddenly grew
the fangs I with held suddenly withdrew
the words chanting in my head suddenly profound:
No one can stop us or slow us down
We are the named and we are known
We know that we'll never walk alone"
He look in horror, shocked of what I've become
none the less I thought he was quite dumb
as he arched his neck as if I'd pounce
instead I walked away thinking, Stupid louse
Author notes
[B]lissfullhatre[d]
- Blissfulhatred
1. "I want to see your face when I kill you! I want to see the light leave your eyes!"
Rhyme/Freeverse
10-20 lines
2. Lyrics- Thrice- Image Of The Invisible
"We all were lost now we are found
No one can stop us or slow us down
We are the named and we are known
We know that we'll never walk alone"
3.
Picture-
http://maanesten.deviantart.com/art/Hate-30391385
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Interesting, very interesting. Incorporating the lyrics into the write was good. Using all three prompts was good, just maybe not direct quoting. Good write either way. Thanks =D
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