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November Sunrise

Day light breaks forth from the horizon
The hope and anticipations of a new day
Clouds filled with colors that are memorizin’
Light beams on water vapor, what a display

Beautiful colors within all different hues
Pinks, oranges, yellows and reds
Fading in to darkness in purples and blues
While society rest safely in their beds

These clouds that hang look laden with rain
As they pour in from the great white north
More weather coming in for the eastern plain
Bringing a chance for cleansing forth

Watching the sunrise on this November morn’
Amazed as yet another day has been born

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J T O D D U N D E R H I L L

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  • AngelicDreams
    November 24
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    This is nice

    Thank you for entering and good luck!


  • deeply.desturbed
    November 9
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    i liked it!


  • Princess-Petunia
    November 8

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    soothing

    this is beautiful a warm soothing look at sunrise. One of God's amazing miracles that we are lucky to have the privilege to see every day. You have described it so well with your choice of words, thankyou

  • Very beautiful. What a soft, serene, and vivid portrait of nature you have painted upon the page with your poetry.

    ya All~Ways,
    ~ Jan ~