Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Never Been to Alaska

I have never been to Alaska,
Despite this freezing chill I bear.
My heart moving, but not open.
A simple beat, my frozen fear.

Icicles cover my eyes,
blinded.
I'm fighting, losing things I cannot see.
I hear voices saying, "my hearts too guarded".
Thier cold stares affixed,
convinced,
But not seeing me.

I have never been to Alaska.
It's freezing chill I'd spite.
My loneliness,
Depressed,
A reminder,
My heart is numbed,
succumed,
To frostbite.

Still longing for healing in my heart

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • sharon duveau
    November 8

    Edit | Reply
    creative...really great assimilation with Alaska and the feeling of being depressed. very impressive.