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Haiku/Senryu – [peacock]




    peacock-
two legged rainbow
            everyman’s dream




Author notes

Nature's creatures
and
captured smiles

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  • Swan song gold member
    1 day ago
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    no i like this and I love that middle line and could take this even as a play on humor which i see it is also a senryu Well done and thank you for your entry


  • Naughtygrlred
    November 18
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    Mine tool


  • grannyeri gold member
    November 8
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    Liked yur haiku - we used to raise these lovely birds on our acreage when we lived in the country and they were such great watchdogs - mothers were good with their young, and the males made wonderful topics of conversation.


  • Nature Song silver member
    November 8
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    Indeed everyman's dream. To strut his feathers with captured smiles, as he walks upon his two legs that nature gave him. Lol...only some wishful thinking!

    Good luck in the contest!

    ~Sie