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Enchantments and Promises


tomorrow’s madness a parting melody
  moonlight offerings land and then fly
mother’s enchantments bound at your feet
time floats in memories with evening sighs

piano echoes sail over the earth
  ghostly lullaby in a soft-spoken stream
carpimus noctem cum Morpheus
as we search the night with gods of dream

sparks from a life carefully fashioned
  a mountain that sleeps on wings of sorrows
burnt castle embers lost among stars
a Christmas day promising loving tomorrows.



Author notes

J U S T P L A I N W A Y N E T H E N (yes, that was torture! )
based on the lyrics and music of “The Safest Way Into Tomorrow” by the Trans Siberian Orchestra

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  • Ice Queen
    November 8
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    Very nice! I loved it, you have a wonderful talent. Keep up the good work and you have excellent penmanship.


  • ShaShay
    November 8
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    As usual, I love what you penned here. I especially liked the lines:
    mother’s enchantments bound at your feet
    time floats in memories with evening sighs
    Maybe because it reminded me of when my mama was there when i was young and how safe she made me feel. I miss that.
    Pen on dear one.
    Sharon