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Pitching tents near an abandoned adjective

rolling words across this page like a dung beetle
until I balled paper up
making a pitiful nest out of strange thoughts.

This was a dismal abode.

If minimalism was a syllable,
I now lived in a sentence too dead to inhabit.
Pitching a tent of blank canvas
near an abandoned adjective
I managed to pour out some clichés for a birthday card.

It was then I lay down my pen, leaning back,
remembering my creative friend
whom I abandoned for a dollar.
I picked up my pen;
it now weighed heavier than a basilica cross - stabbing
my chest I became doubly depressed
noticing my man cans are now larger than last year.
Non creative with hairy tits-
No amount of money can save you from that.

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  • Raining Kisses silver member
    November 16
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    wow...this is awesome....i like it a lot

  • unknownpleasure
    November 13
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    Simply genius.


  • leo2
    November 11
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    Why am I not surprised?... lol. A creative, amusing and distinctly DP Robertsonesque verse about the bane of every serious writer. It's so good to see your work gracing the pages of AP again. I wish you well in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long

  • leafy
    November 8
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    oddly, this cheered me up a bit.