Reflections of my mind
sit upon my page
people just can't see my pain
consumed inside my rage
people wrote me off before
I even wrote a line
but this shits like a fountain
flowing just so fine
my soul is only lost
fallen by my sins
but when I'm laid to rest
I'll sit with all the kings
am I the only one
talking like no other
but time just takes a toll
just like god did on my brother
tears keep rolling down my heart
for the streets without no names
lost inside this fallen soul
broken by lifes pains
taking lines upto that point
my mind is on the brink
thats why I tell you what I think
inside my broken ink
Please tell me what you think
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this is full of emotions and very well formed. the flow is smooth consuming me like a drug. this is the kind of poem that i could sit and read and day till night and still not having enough of it
marvelous work. keep the ink flowing dont stop it
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good
Theres a lot of emotion in this piece you have written, and it also seems very personal to your own experiences. Good write
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