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together

adorned in moonlight's silken fingers
each touch the others' warmth
no sound

fleeting breaths of cloud-laced breezes
send chills to posture's deepest corner

there is no need of fear in this
a quiet repose 'neath covering trees

should dew arrive to quench a thirst
not birthed in love but simple need

these two of hallowed mystical muse
might find their way to valley's floor
or hilltop mesa's blue-green pasture
evening's solitude befitting

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picture prompt is here http://allpoetry.com/contest/2466083

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  • condor gold member
    November 12

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    I really have to agree with the two people below. This piece was just so beautifully put across, giving a feeling of peace and solitude and an emotional feel of well being. I loved this heaps and thank oyu so much for entering and wish you the very best in the contest. To the finalist list.

  • Oh wow, this is pure poetry to me You have excelled with this stunning piece. Your words are tender and eloquent. Just beautiful Best wishes in this contest


  • mgmc gold member
    November 8

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    Very beautiful imagery! Very sensual. I particularly like the image of a hilltop mesa's blue-green pasture. Well done! Glad the internet cooperated!